Thomson/Heinle  The Sundance Reader, Third Ediiton
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The Sundance Reader
Third Edition
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Modes of Exposition

Comparison/Contrast

Parallel States: Israel and Ireland

Despite obvious historical and cultural differences, Israel and Ireland share striking similarities. 1 Both are small - each has a population of about five million - yet significant nations. Israel is a narrow sliver of desert on the Mediterranean, a Middle Eastern country with negligible oil reserves. Ireland, an island on the fringe of Europe, is a neutral nation which played marginal roles in World War II and the Cold War. 2

Yet these nations have greater profiles than their larger and more powerful neighbors, largely because they represent homelands to vast Diaspora populations.3 More Jews live in America than Israel; more Irish live in America than Ireland. American Jews and Irish were significant supporters of the Zionist and Republican movements that helped establish the modern independent states.

Their recent emergence as sovereign states indicates a shared legacy of oppression and occupation. Although both the Jews and the Irish have cultures thousands of years old, Israel and Ireland did not achieve full independence until after the Second World War.4 Israel was recognized by the United Nations in 1948. Though partitioned in 1922, Ireland was not officially declared a republic until 1949, ending eight hundred years of British influence.

Since their creation, Israel and Ireland have endured decades of violence and terrorism.5 Both nations have labored to maintain democratic rights while preserving security for their citizenry.

Both nations have dual identities. On one hand, both Israel and Ireland were founded as Western-style parliamentary democracies. Yet both are religious states. Israel is the Jewish homeland. Ireland is a Catholic nation.6 The religious authorities - the Catholic bishops and orthodox rabbis - believe citizens should accept their views on marriage, divorce, abortion, censorship, and civil customs. Secular forces, who view the religious orthodoxies as tradition-bound and male dominated, champion diversity and tolerance. Issues such as the role of women and gay rights evoke similar debates in Israel and Ireland as both nations struggle to reconcile their political and religious traditions.

In recent years both nations have engaged in a peace process to resolve long-standing conflicts in contested areas.7 In both Northern Ireland and the West Bank, the populations are split by religious, political, and cultural differences.

Recently the President of the United States, prompted by the large number of Jews and Irish in America, played a pivotal role in stimulating stalled peace talks. Negotiations in both regions were difficult to conduct because Israeli and Northern Irish politicians did not wish to recognize leaders of terrorist organizations.

By first inviting Yasser Arafat and Gerry Adams to the White House, Bill Clinton helped transform their public images from terrorists to legitimate leaders so that other democratic leaders could negotiate with them without appearing to endorse violence.8

Despite ongoing tensions in both regions, Israel and Ireland enjoy expanding tourism, particularly from millions to American Jews and Irish who enjoy visiting homelands that represent their heritage.9



Question for Review and Revision

  1. Does the list of similarities support the thesis or does the paper seem artificial?
  2. Is the topic too broad for a short essay?
  3. How important is paragraph structure in the essay?

Key to Highlighted Passages

  1. Opens the essay with disclaimer anticipating reader objections. This serves to prepare the audience to consider a comparison they probably find odd or even laughable at first glance.
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  3. 1st point of similarity. Initial comparison between the two countries, emphasizing their minor status in the world community.
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  5. 2nd point of similarity. Though small, both nations have historical and cultural significance to people around the world.
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  7. 3rd point of similarity. Although both Jews and Irish are ancient peoples, the modern nation states only emerged following WWII.
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  9. 4th point of similarity. Terrorism is a problem in both Ireland and Israel.
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  11. 5th point of similarity. Both Israel and Ireland seek to be secular democratic nations yet reflect strong religious traditions.
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  13. 6th point of similarity. Peace process in both nations.
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  15. 7th point of similarity. Parallel role of American President in facilitating negotiations.
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  17. Final point of similarity serving as conclusion.
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