Thomson/Heinle  The Sundance Reader, Third Ediiton
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The Sundance Reader
Third Edition
+ The Writing Process
+ Grammar
+ Special Kinds of Writing
+ Research and the Research Paper
+ Modes of Exposition
+ Quizzes
+ Sample Student Essays
+ Walkthroughs
+ Appendix
Modes of Exposition

Description

Cities of the Dead

From the freeway the tombs look like a collection of children's playhouses.1 The white mausoleums mimic spired churches, porticoed mansions, neo-classic banks, Greek temples. The more elaborate tombs are arranged in neat rows and are adorned with flowers. Humbler tombs, resembling concrete dog houses, are jammed haphazardly together like lost luggage.

Few graveyards are as famous as New Orleans' above-ground cemeteries. In the 1700s the city's earliest settlers buried their dead along the banks of the Mississippi. As the population grew, the city selected a plot of land near Rampart Street as a burial ground. The traditional practice of burying the dead caused problems in Louisiana's tropical climate and watery soil. The water table was so high that grave diggers frequently struck water after two feet. Coffins bobbed to the surface and had to be sunk. Decaying bodies posed a major health threat, especially in summer. As a result, the dead had to be interned above ground in "vaults."2

Unlike tombs in other cities, the vaults of New Orleans are reusable. Following a burial, the coffin is sealed in the vault until the body decomposes. Later the remaining bones are removed and placed in a lower crypt, leaving space for a new coffin. This way a single vault can serve a family for generations. Organizations offered their members a cheaper alternative to the family vault by building attached tombs. Often several stories tall, these "apartment buildings" provided rows of tombs called "ovens."3

Those resting in the three cemeteries, St. Louis Nos. one, two, and three, reflect the city's colorful history. Among the bankers and former mayors lie the remains of Dominque You, a pirate; the chess player Paul Morphy; and Alexander Milne, a noted philanthropist.4

But perhaps the most famous and mysterious tomb belongs to Marie Laveau, still revered by many as the Voodoo Queen. 5 Loyal followers of Marie Laveau enact elaborate graveyard rituals to curry favor. Seeking her blessing, they turn around three times, tap the slab of the tomb three times, and make a cross with the edge of a brick kept atop the tomb. Visitors leave flowers and light votive candles, while others place "hoodoo money" - two pennies or a dime and a penny - in the flower holders flanking the tomb of one of the most famous residents in the City of the Dead.



Question for Review and Revision

  1. What is your general impression of this essay? Do you find it an effective description?
  2. Does the essay provide enough visual details to give readers a full understanding of what the tombs look like?
  3. The student places certain terms in quotation marks. Is this an effective device? Are these terms clearly defined?
  4. Do you see details that could be deleted?
  5. Read the paper aloud. Are there any passages awkward or missing?

Key to Highlighted Passages

  1. The writer organizes the description by offering an initial glimpse from a distance,
    then moves closer to provide more details.
      (back)
  2. This paragraph provides a brief history of the cemeteries, explaining how they came into being.
  3.   (back)
  4. Writer highlights special terms with quotation marks, then defines them to prevent confusion.
  5.   (back)
  6. Paragraph lists famous people buried in the "Cities of the Dead.
  7.   (back)
  8. Writer devotes an entire paragraph to one of the most famous persons buried in the cemetery.
  9.   (back)
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